bittyjane

I had so much fun reading this entry. I love the story! It was very effective, even at its short length, because it was easily relatable to other historical tales of unexpected killers (ehem, or suspects, I guess we should say...?) yet your skillful writing made the piece feel unique. I was able to get the context and reference, while still feeling like I was reading very original work. You ended it in the right place as well to where it had a nice little hook that let your mind continue to wonder.

Really well done and entertaining!